Catch it!

 In the long desert there lived meerkats. One meerkat woke up then fell asleep. He woke all the meerkats up so they can go outside to look at the fruit. After an hour, this hawk came to eat the fruit. So the hawk took the fruit and all the meerkats worked together to get the fruit back. Then they started to fight, so they were hanging onto the hawks feet while it was flying. All of them hung onto each others legs so they could get the fruit. They tried and tried, then they got it back from the hawk! So they. Played rugby with it then one meerkat kicked the fruit then it cracked open then they were very upset they lost their fruit!

All of a sudden....

We are playing outside with your friends when all of a sudden we saw a little girl singing "la la la la".

So we went to see where she was singing, because it sounded lovely. Then when we went CLOSER, she looked back at us creepily. She looked evil. 

We ran but she was following us so then we hid at the back of the bush so she couldn't see us. 

She was looking for us and she found us finally. 

We ran inside the strangers house then she didn’t find us so we were safe. 

Be safe around strangers.

I heard a bang....

I heard a bang from downstairs but I was home alone because my mum and dad were going out for dinner. 

So then I went downstairs to see where the bang was coming from. But when I got downstairs, it was dark so I went back upstairs to peek out the window to see the bang.

 I didn’t see who was making the bang from the window, I was confused. But I saw my mum and dad in the distance, coming home. 

So I told my mum and dad about it and then I went back upstairs. I finally found out where the noise was coming from. It was coming from the forest outside. 

So then I went back to sleep, I heard the bang again so I went to see it but it stopped so I went back to sleep.

The Castle

I heard a scream in the distance and ran towards the sound only to discover an old castle. Then I saw a girl inside the old castle calling for help.

She was scared, so I went and helped her get out of the old castle. But she was stuck in a chair. Someone had tied her up. So I had to get a knife and cut the string off the chair to free her. 

Suddenly, I heard another sound coming from the room. I ran outside with the girl as fast as we could. Then we went to my home in the forest to escape the scary castle. 

Later, when it was safe, we went back to the old castle and we went inside to try and explore. We heard another sound from the behind us, so we sprinted out again and went back to my home. 

We were safe at my house and we never went back to the castle again.

My descriptive writing

I carefully look from behind the tree and saw a tall creature standing  in the shallow water. I then went back behind the tree because I thought I was going to get found by him.

I went back then the creature heard a sound from behind the tree. The creature walked to the tree. The man knew the creature was walking towards the tree so he got out his bow and the man ran to another tree to wait.  He wanted to make sure the creature didn’t see him.

Then the creature continued to walk through the shallow water.