My descriptive writing

I carefully look from behind the tree and saw a tall creature standing  in the shallow water. I then went back behind the tree because I thought I was going to get found by him.

I went back then the creature heard a sound from behind the tree. The creature walked to the tree. The man knew the creature was walking towards the tree so he got out his bow and the man ran to another tree to wait.  He wanted to make sure the creature didn’t see him.

Then the creature continued to walk through the shallow water.